1st story: Describes a topic;
gives the facts; makes an observation. This level of thesis makes
observations that are non-controversial (i. e. no reasonable person
would disagree with them). A person reading such a thesis immediately
thinks: "Yes, this is true."
2nd story:
interprets, gives a point of view on, and/or adds controversy to
the facts of the first story. By adding controversy, I mean it takes
a position on the facts which is not obvious, a position which
reasonable person could disagree with. A person reading a 2-story
thesis thinks: "That's an interesting point of view; now prove it to
me." By controversial, I do not
mean this thesis has to be absurd or idiosyncratic; you'll never be
able to convince your reader of that kind of argument. Rather, I
mean it takes one position out of a number of positions.
3rd story: relates
the 2-story thesis to the bigger picture, explains its
significance, sets it a new context. This is the most difficult type
of thesis to describe (and write) because it can take so many forms.
I find it helpful to think of this story "opening out" - as if
though a skylight - to a wider view. It is the answer you get when
you ask of a 2-story thesis, "so what?" The reader should say: "I
see why this argument matters." The pitfall in this type of thesis,
that you want to be careful to avoid, is that it can get too
ambitious, and try to make a bigger claim that you're able to
substantiate (e.g. "My analysis of Sonnet 18 shows that all Western
poetry is morally bankrupt and self-serving."
Examples
1st story: Anne
Bradstreet's "The Author to Her Book" employs metrical
substitution, imagery that depicts her writing as illegitimate
child, and an allusion to Greek mythology.
2nd story: Anne
Bradstreet's "The Author to Her Book" employs metrical
substitution, imagery that depicts her writing as an illegitimate
child, and an allusion to Greek mythology in order to convey her
vexed relationship to her writing.
3rd story: Anne
Bradstreet's "The Author to Her Book" employs metrical
substitution, imagery that depicts her writing as an illegitimate
child, and an allusion to Greek mythology, which allows her to
convey her vexed situation as an author. This vexed quality,
ultimately reflects on the larger situation of gender and writing in
the new world.
4th Story!: There's no need for your essay to read like a list. Revise your thesis so that it flows more naturally.
Anne
Bradstreet's "The Author to Her Book" reflects her vexed situation
as an author, a relationship that largely reflects the prevailing
attitudes about writing and gender in the New World.
In this
example, you would still discuss those aspects listed above in the
body of your essay, but there's no need for you to give a run down at
the beginning of your paper.
As you can see, each story
depends on the one below it. It is difficult, to say the least, to
build a three-story house without a first story. The same holds true
with a thesis: a two-story thesis needs a first story, and a
three-story thesis needs a first and second story.
